Ok guys...In my whole life ive never published or even TRIED writing music ( only to myself in my head and then forget it after about 10 min...lol )
Here is a piece ive done...its still under "construction" has some distortion, also havnt been "edited", but that'll still be fixed...This is as "origenal" as you can get...lol. The reason for posting this is i just want some feedback on the "tune" if possable :)

Welcome :D - tune sounds good :thumb:
there seems to be a little clipping or overload of whatever unit/device your running through giving some buzzy distortion on some of the notes that pop out a bit more. You might want to address that for starters if you have a compressor/limitor function or can just turn down the unit that is getting overloaded a bit till it cleans up - just a thought - otherwise it sounds good

Yeah...thats what i meant by "feedback"...lol
This was done with a Fender Strat, Zoom box, then straight through the computer's soundcard......no amp....Let's say, this piece is still in "raw" mode...lol

Nice opening for a song there....sounded a bit like a Blackfoot tune I remember from way back called 'Highway Song'. It is a bit 'hot' just reduce the level slightly to lose that clipping and you have a nice tone there. :thumb:

Nice opening for a song there....sounded a bit like a Blackfoot tune I remember from way back called 'Highway Song'. It is a bit 'hot' just reduce the level slightly to lose that clipping and you have a nice tone there. :thumb:

Thanks brother....will look into it :)
Btw...i notice when i play it via this website's "any player", the speed is waaaay to fast..lol

Welcome to the site hun....I think this will be a fantastic piece once finished..I like the slow melodic kinda vibe it has..:)

Welcome to the site hun....I think this will be a fantastic piece once finished..I like the slow melodic kinda vibe it has..:)

Thx Rain...You guys are giving me some "hope" there..lol :)

Yeah...thats what i meant by "feedback"...lol
This was done with a Fender Strat, Zoom box, then straight through the computer's soundcard......no amp....Let's say, this piece is still in "raw" mode...lol
Reminded me a lil at the begining to House of the rising sun. Hey where are you plugging the zoom box in? Seems like it´s a bit too distorted, that happens if you plug it in the mic instead of the line in, besides other factors. Cool idea you got there, I like it.

Reminded me a lil at the begining to House of the rising sun. Hey where are you plugging the zoom box in? Seems like it´s a bit too distorted, that happens if you plug it in the mic instead of the line in, besides other factors. Cool idea you got there, I like it.

Thanks bud..Yep...youre 100% correct...i played it via my soundcard's mic...but that was just a test..I just wanted to know if im on the right track, but it seems like it, and im glad...thx hey ;)

That sounds pretty cool to me. Puts me in mind of many a western movie and its a lovely mood piece. sounds great :thumb:

Hey Bro....welcome to the site!!! Another old timer here!!!:thumb: Really liked the theme here....a hint of The Outlaws to my ears!!! Keep workin' on this...could be a gr8 tune!!!:woot:

Hey Bro....welcome to the site!!! Another old timer here!!!:thumb: Really liked the theme here....a hint of The Outlaws to my ears!!! Keep workin' on this...could be a gr8 tune!!!:woot:

lol...thx bud...yeah...but im still thinking of adding a bit of vocals...just a little to break the song-routine :)