I was playing some stuff today, and I started working on some ideas for a new tune. I recorded 1 minute worth of stuff so I wouldnt forget it all. It's me playing everything here, and I think it turned out pretty cool so I thought I'd share it. Cause I dont know if I'm gonna manage to make this into a complete song. Hope I do, cause I sorta like it so far :toothless:
Waddaya think? Can I do anything with this? Any ideas of where to go if I want a second part on this one and not just this same thing looped over and over?

Sounds great !! Dude !!

I would put in a break are a stop and then move it up a key with the same chord pattern .


Sounds awesome though man !!:rock:

Sounds nice Per, but I think it needs some shred and less blues and then some... :lol:

Nah seriously, this sounds great. You HAVE to elaborate on it, it would be kinda interesting to hear you branch out to stuff outside the blues world. But why bother when you have such an obvious passion and god given talent for this stuff. Put some thought and work into this one, it will shine as bright as any other Original I have heard on here, im sure of that.

dude, DEFINITELY put some lyrics over that shit! oh my god, i think i need to change my pants, that's how good it was! dude, that's like, radio good brah!

It does song good!! Has a great groove. The harmonica and the slide guitars are perfect with the playing. Myself, I would leave out the lead guitar altogether and catch more of that blues flavor. Get lyrics and vocals and your set.

Should be an excellent tune!! :thumb: :thumb:

Sounds nice Per, but I think it needs some shred and less blues and then some... :lol:



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Thats brilliant Naif, you gotta take it further. I think I agree with both GW ang 3F, cant wait to hear it finished. :yourock:

good start. sounds good so far

It sounds excellent Naif , i love that harmonica and gotta enjoy the acoustic guitaring without a doubt:D
Im not sure what you could do to take it further m8, im not that heavily blues orienated , but i think it deserves more to be added to it for sure :rock: :rock:

:thumb:More more.....soon!
Love it, has a great feel!
But ditch the shredding:D

Really nice work Per, sounds very professional and definately has scope to be made into something full on with vocals and stuff. Very good work bro....:yourock:

Sounds cool to me man. :yourock:. Maybe a change of key to a lower one afterwise, without the beans, for a few bars, and then come up again. Or some call and response leaving some silences here and there. LOL, I don´t know, but you asked for it, it´s your thing, and I´m just thinking while typing.

Thanks alot for the very kind responses! The key change thing was a good idea, I'm gonna try that. Maybe add some breaks too.

Naif! Sounds great man,...I feel that it needs a good ass kickin drum track! Like I felt a snare hit a few times then a kickin beat to follow. Vox for sure,.. and I agree no solo's in the begining of the tune,..well maybe a short intro solo,..then take it from there!! Sounds great though!! Gotta complete it man,..but IMO,..it needs an ass kickin drum track!! :thumb:

Johnny

Naif! Sounds great man,...I feel that it needs a good ass kickin drum track! Like I felt a snare hit a few times then a kickin beat to follow. Vox for sure,.. and I agree no solo's in the begining of the tune,..well maybe a short intro solo,..then take it from there!! Sounds great though!! Gotta complete it man,..but IMO,..it needs an ass kickin drum track!! :thumb:

Johnny

Awww man, I hate doing drum tracks :p

Sounds great Per

awaiting completion now with hunger!! :thumb:

:toothless:Are you not done yet???
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Awww man, I hate doing drum tracks :p

Me to,..but it needs one! It would really come alive!! See what ya can do!! Take your time!!

Johnny

It sounds great! I like the harmonicas and the bassy sounding vibe at the beginning....but I agree with Bulletman, it would rock even more with a good drum track! Some sound type vocals, not necessarily words would be cool too....mmm...mmm....ah type things. Look forward to hearing the finished
track. Great job so far! Thanks for sharing!

Mare :)

realy very cool and a big sound. i liked this one a lot:thumb:

can't wait for the end product, as that sounded great and exciting to me