I have never posted one of my songs before (because they are not finished yet) but this one I just liked and thought I might share it.

It was written for my wife, just because.

It's all one take stuff, just feeling creative last night I guess. Mixed the best I know how right now, I'm still learning.

Thanks for listening.

Sounds great! Some bass and synth would sound awesome!!

Good tune man i hope the Mrs appreciates it! As said,a bit of bass for def and even a bit of synth would make this come to life more. If i had a wife i'd write her a tune too but it would prob be death metal!:D

Cool tune Satchmo, liked the melodies and the rhythm guitar was cool. As said, Bass would be a good additon. did have a Satriani vibe, not sure if that was intended. V.Good. Hope the Wife's pleased with it, you're not after a new guitar are you, I tried that trick, did'nt work for me though!....wife did'nt buy it.:dunno:

Thanks guys, I'll put some bass on it this weekend. I am still learning how to take the bass straight in and get it to sound good and I just got a bass a couple of weeks ago so I am still learning to set a groove and not overrun the song.

Lately, I have been listening to a lot of Satch, DC Slater and Ty Oliver, who all share that same vibe. It wasnt intentional. That is just how my musical mind is programmed I guess.

You all do not know how excited I am to be writing and recording, I have never been creative with anything else in my life but as soon as I hear a progression lately, a melody is already popping into my head.

You guys are the first ones outside a few online buddies to hear anything I've done. My playing has improved drastically and I am finally able to put some of the melodies and solos I hear in my head to the fretboard.

Thanks!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

OK guys, added some bass. Hope it's not too much, I'm not a bass player per se.

very nice, enjoyed that, Satch like:wavey:

OK guys, added some bass. Hope it's not too much, I'm not a bass player per se.


The bass fitted well dude, nice little tune. I need to get back into doing my own stuff too. Good work. And nice to see over from G101 as well.

Thanks Axe2!!! I'm having more fun playing guitar now that I am writing my own stuff.

Did you post your Satch tune over here? That rocked!!!!!

Jeff

Thanks Axe2!!! I'm having more fun playing guitar now that I am writing my own stuff.

Did you post your Satch tune over here? That rocked!!!!!

Jeff

yeah I did mate, its on the 2nd or 3rd page of the covers section. thanks for checking it out Jeff..:)