feedback i greatly appreciated

sorry if it's off at times

hope you guys like it


http://www.soundclick.com/bands/songInfo.cfm?bandID=761213&songID=5883031

Well done! Very impressive tune and restrained too. I was dreading it turning into a heavy track halfway through - but you did good and kept the focus of the tune and song just right. Your singer is very good too.

Rather excellent!!

Really nice tune wheelbarrow and nice avatar too haha!:D Is that you singin' here? Fantastic voice if so man! Few off notes here and there guitar-wise i thought but still a thoroughly enjoyable tune!:thumb:

BTW: If ya want more feedback for ur tunes i'd suggest checkin' out other peoples tunes,that way they'll see u and more than likely check urs out!Also the originals forum doesn't get that much attention here at present i'm afraid.:(