I wrote this tune tittled (Awaken) and was wondering if any one wanted to make a song out of it could use all elements so If any one is intristed just post and let me know as far as lyrics go I can wright some are the vocalist can Im open to vocal arrangements thanks all take care.

I might be interested in this. Did you have a feel of what you wanted the song to be about. Do you have any lyrics ideas already?

Let me know.

Rod

I might be interested in this. Did you have a feel of what you wanted the song to be about. Do you have any lyrics ideas already?

Let me know.

Rod

Hay thats great !!

Ive got a ton of ideas for content If you want me too I can wright lyrics for it tonight and then you can pic and choose are add to it if ya want .

Are if you have your own Idea you want to explore shoot me a pm and I'll try to wright lyrics around your Idea are you can wright them either witch way is fine with me If you have some ideas on content let me know im open to theem.

But I would like to hopefully keep the lyrical content inspiring and positive to make the listener feel uplifted if posible would that work for you ?

Thanks a bunch look foreword to working on this with you cool.:thumb:

Why don't you go ahead and write the lyrics you were thinking of and I can make small changes if I think its needed(with your approval).

I just want to mainly work on the melody if thats ok.

rj

Why don't you go ahead and write the lyrics you were thinking of and I can make small changes if I think its needed(with your approval).

I just want to mainly work on the melody if thats ok.

rj

Sounds great !!! Im sending you a pm ok cool.

Here you go Rod decided to go with a story line of the (four horsemen of the apocalypse ) what an epic dude let me know if you like it and want to advance this thanks man.



Awaken
00;40 start of first vrs.

Pestilence rides upon
a silent sleeping world
He wears a crown of conquest
offering peace to the people
How Long,How Long
Will he claim his victory
As he sits upon his white horse
passing out empty dreams

"Chours"
Awaken my mind
Awaken my soal
Awaken my spirit
It's time to go

Awaken my body
Awaken my eye's
Awaken my thought's
no time for lies

The four thay ride
high in the sky
Taking their toll
on every life
Thay kill with the sword
And with hunger and death
I watched the beast laughing
wile counting the dead

1:50 Start next vers.

Then comes the red horse riding
Riding the dreams of war
With blood spilled on the battle field
He carries his sword

2:22 pre chorus

Famine rides upon
A silent sleeping world
with a measure of wheat for a penny
He offers to the poor
How Long, How Long
Will he claim his victory
Wile his scales starve the future
of the lost and the weak

"Chorus"

Awaken my mind
Awaken my soal
Awaken my spirit
It's time to go

Awaken my body
Awaken my eye's
Awaken my thought's
no time for lies

The four thay ride
high in the sky
Taking their toll
on every life
Thay kill with the sword
And with hunger and death
I watched the beast laughing
wile counting the dead

"Solo" 3:32 to 4:09
Then last vers. and outro

Then comes the pale horse riding
Riding the dreams of war
Taking all the lost soals
And claiming them as his own

"On the break " ------ Hell follows with death

"Outro "

When the white horse rides
he shows his bow
When the red horse rides
he slays with a sword
When the black horse rides
thay will all starve
When the pale horse rides
there will be fear and decay

"Last Break"

Hell Follows with death

"Fini"

Im going to have to extend the outro to fit all the lyrics so ill work on that talk with ya soon.

Ill work on this tomorrow Rod and hopfully finish it up latter.

I must be the only person here that can't play by ear. I have yet to see an offering where someone tells what key a song is in.

Not complaining, just an observation.

Kick ass riffs man!!

Thanks dude.

This song is in A take care.

:thumb: thanks

Hmmm - Im listening to the tune - sounds pretty kik ass - I think id like to give the solo guitars a try. Where in the song would solos go? (ie minute / second markers)

Thx!

88

Oh - Rjmj and I have collabed before and hes a kik ass vocalist so this could be good! :)

Hay thanks for having a listen I'm working on it now but I think this is going to be a work in progress probly be ready by thanksgiving.

So If your still around by then I'll give you a shout!!!

Hay thanks for having a listen I'm working on it now but I think this is going to be a work in progress probly be ready by thanksgiving.

So If your still around by then I'll give you a shout!!!

Sure - I'll be monitoring this thread, so just let me know when ur ready. In the meantime, I'll prolly fiddle with the tune as it is and see what I can come up with just for the heck of it.

Oh - BTW - this song reminds me of the style of Queens Reich - very nice! :)

88

Hay thanks.

if its ok i would like a go at the solo section...
give me a chance to do something i dont do often enough....
i like the song very much even though its not what i would usualy listen to in terms of metal style stuff
:D

GuitarWizard (http://www.guitarblast.com/showthread.php/member.php?u=1274) Great song bro! If you're interested,..I would love to mix this one for you. PM if you want me to give it a shot. If not,..that's cool too.
Rockin tune man!
:yourock:
Johnny

Sure people it's a forum jam so all are welcome what I think ill do though is us do maby more than one version of the song and bullet man you can mix up your own version if I can get the master vocal track from rj.

Take care.

Sure people it's a forum jam so all are welcome what I think ill do though is us do maby more than one version of the song and bullet man you can mix up your own version if I can get the master vocal track from rj.

Take care.


Sure ya can! I've jammed with him before! He's a great guy. He won't have any problem with that. When ya get everything together just send me all the tracks. Please no effects on the Drums or Bass guitar. This should be fun! Looking forward to it..
Thanks bro!

Johnny

Hay all I'm glad to announce that I'm going to scrap this project do to hacking for the time being until I get a few things worked out which wont take too long but at least I wont be dependant on the internet to record and it will sound a thousand times better than all the crap thay offer for software as well .

So my apology's to though's that really wanted to take part.

Marry Christmas.

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Hay all I'm glad to announce that I'm going to scrap this project do to hacking for the time being until I get a few things worked out which wont take too long but at least I wont be dependant on the internet to record and it will sound a thousand times better than all the crap thay offer for software as well .

So my apology's to though's that really wanted to take part.

Marry Christmas.

Bummer bro,..what made ya change your mind?? We all where looking forward to this! I understand though,...good luck with it and please post it when you're done.
Happy holidays to ya!

Johnny