Tell me what you think of this. It isnt done yet... Obviously I plan on using it and am in the process of writing lyrics and lengthening the song, but i think i have a good thing going. Therefore if i hear this on sumones album, i'll find you.... lol.

Feel free to look and leave me feedback

i don't see it.

oops here it is

too big to post as pdf...

i like the chug factor that it's got. sounds good dude...(records this and sells millions of albums and bangs more chicks than Tom Jones):woot:

lol

ty for feedback